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Binu Sivan's avatar

I know this is a poem but you had me on the edge of my seat, in tears, devastated and defeated and then whooping with joy - all in my head but for the length of this gorgeous poem, I felt it all. 💜

Devika gayi ghum(ne)'s avatar

You are such a champion for us aspiring artists. Thank you my friend 🤗

Deepika Khatri's avatar

Your poems reminded me of an essay by Erica Berry - The Fault of Time (https://emergencemagazine.org/essay/the-fault-of-time/) on the impermanence of landscape and her relationship to it.

Jacarandas have a special place in my heart. This love poem to it is a song to life.

Shalini Puri's avatar

Devika with you I grieve for the fallen jacaranda tree, your poetry transported me to the scene, the mercilessness and the ultimate message of life always seeping out.

Devika gayi ghum(ne)'s avatar

Shalini, it affected me for months and the return of the flowers has been a rebirth of sorts. Life affirming

Alaknanda Sengupta's avatar

Devika this is a painting a poem and essay filled with love, loss and rebirth. The whole thing is amazing, the first stanza pure genius.🩷🩷🩷

Devika gayi ghum(ne)'s avatar

Alaknanda, what generous praise. Thank you

Charulatha Banerjee's avatar

This was prose poetry read in one breath. Very powerful Devika. Looking forward to more writing from Kenya.

Devika gayi ghum(ne)'s avatar

Thank you charulatha! I’m on it

Naina Raturi's avatar

Beautiful, Devika. "Life seeping out from the massacre, what might!"

I am reading the book "Women who run with the wolves", and its author asserts that the way we hack at our mother earth, we hack at female bodies in the same way - pruning, digging, clearing our surfaces to please the patriarchal overlords. Nature and women are controlled similarly. I felt your grief and saw the hope the mighty tree has shown.

Devika gayi ghum(ne)'s avatar

Thank you Naina for reading. What coincidence, I started reading it a few days ago. I’m right at the beginning though…

Naina Raturi's avatar

Oh wow, a lovely coincidence! You will love it.